tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5562283155833378792.post6405141773276792345..comments2023-09-07T00:45:57.162+10:00Comments on Riff: 328. Life in The Old Girl yetJuliehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09513648613788716017noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5562283155833378792.post-79100393009662251982010-12-05T07:54:37.556+11:002010-12-05T07:54:37.556+11:00However, upon re-reading, I feel that 'lends&#...However, upon re-reading, I feel that 'lends' should have been 'lent'.<br /><br />My mentor in all this tense stuff, is adamant that I should try to not mix my tenses as much as I do. <br /><br />Until then, I was not aware that this was a problem, I was just concentrating on the story, rather than the words.<br /><br />Now, I must do both ...Juliehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09513648613788716017noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5562283155833378792.post-14787948154866854572010-12-05T07:43:56.840+11:002010-12-05T07:43:56.840+11:00Now this is comfortably in the present and past.Now this is comfortably in the present and past.Joan Elizabethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16358008925558240778noreply@blogger.com